The Howling winds constantly try to tear you down,But you challenge them.
The cold tries to grasp your body,
but you defy him.
The sun hides its warmth from you.
But you wait for her return.
The snow withholds your food,
but you power through.
The four legged ghosts haunt your children,
but you ward them off.
You survive where many have fallen,
And break the laws of life.
This is the first post today that I'm not going to be mean in my comment. I make an effort to tell the truth in each and every one of my comments.
ReplyDeleteThe idea for this was great. I love how you switch to different things that are trying to kill you and ten you defeat them. I think it would've been better if it rhymed. When I was reading it I felt it wanting to rhyme if that makes any sense. Also, if it would flow a little better it would be perfect.
Please, keep writing.